better, but not 100% - which lighting in which locations? why no pics of your actual cast? actors - still can't completely picture how they're going to look in terms of body lang/expressions, some of the camera shots and edits need explaining more - why those choices in particular. it's nearly there. B+
too brief - think about connotations of each choice, discuss each in detail. always think: what? and why?
ReplyDeleteReally discuss it in detail and say how they'll combine to create a particular mood or feeling
Your Pitch post would benefit from a breakdown of what your idea is/was, and how feedback changed it (if at all).
Getting there but what about actors (in terms of how they act/what they do in the video) and props?
ReplyDeleteConnotations of each choice and their desired effect on the overall message of the video needs to be communicated in a bit more detail.
Otherwise some good choices suitable for the video and well explained.
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better, but not 100% - which lighting in which locations? why no pics of your actual cast? actors - still can't completely picture how they're going to look in terms of body lang/expressions, some of the camera shots and edits need explaining more - why those choices in particular. it's nearly there. B+
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