a lot of what you put in here suggests that pop/TS is mainstream - but you don't use the word. get it in there
re-read it - a few spelling errors and grammatical mistakes, but otherwise good (social class test you say is invalid but it's done again above this post - so maybe omit that)
Good - I'd say for an A you want to look a little more at pop as a genre, or at least female solo stars, to get a better grasp of the genre's TA, rather than just TS fans. So throw in a few bits of data that show Pop is...popular. Also look at casting in videos perhaps - they usually cast people similar to the audience but whom they look up to and aspire to be like.
a lot of what you put in here suggests that pop/TS is mainstream - but you don't use the word. get it in there
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Good - I'd say for an A you want to look a little more at pop as a genre, or at least female solo stars, to get a better grasp of the genre's TA, rather than just TS fans. So throw in a few bits of data that show Pop is...popular. Also look at casting in videos perhaps - they usually cast people similar to the audience but whom they look up to and aspire to be like.
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