Teacher Viewing

Me and Gabi have come to a point in the editing where we believe that we are very close to wanting to publish our work on the internet. However before we do so we wanted Mr Benzie our Media teacher to have a look and critic our piece of work. Some of his points related to too many mid and long shots, and not enough close ups. So he suggested to go out and take some more shots if possible, and to also delete the writing at the end as it makes the video un-professional.