For the most part this is very good - it improves as it goes on. There are a lot of spelling mistakes at the start.
you don't really say enough about *what* the feedback you got was (especially early on), and how it helped you along the way. What ideas were you given? What ideas did people dislike? etc.
Try and think of specific examples of things people said to you and how these shaped/altered your work
For the most part this is very good - it improves as it goes on. There are a lot of spelling mistakes at the start.
ReplyDeleteyou don't really say enough about *what* the feedback you got was (especially early on), and how it helped you along the way. What ideas were you given? What ideas did people dislike? etc.
Try and think of specific examples of things people said to you and how these shaped/altered your work
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